指导孩子写好作文的参考书——《梁晓声的写作课》读后感
2024-11-04 16:30:01
满分素材积累1--情绪篇--喜悦快乐兴奋激动
必背好词:joy,delight,pleasure,amusement,happiness,overjoyed(狂喜),joyfully , merry兴奋:excitement
满分短语:dance/jump with joy高兴地跳起来,in high/cheerful spirits 兴高采烈,a mixture of excitement and happiness既兴奋又开心
1.Delighted and thrilled,I gave a jump in the air and then skipped into the supermarket.
我高兴而兴奋地蹦跶了一下,然后蹦蹦跳跳地进了超市。
2.Her hands were trembling with excitement as she opened the box.
当她打开盒子时,她的手激动得发抖。
3.A smile lit up his face and his eyes were shining/twinkling/sparkling with great/excitement.
他脸上露出笑容,双眸闪烁着喜悦/激动的光芒。
4.Tears of joy/happiness welled up in their eyes as they hugged tightly together.
他们喜极而泣,紧紧相拥在一起。
5.She came up to him, with a smile shining like a diamond. In no time his eyes were filled with warm and excited tears.
她挂着灿烂的笑容走到他面前。他立刻激动得热泪盈眶。
6.A sense of joy and happiness swept over/flooded him.
一种喜悦和幸福的感觉涌上他心头。
7.Mom tried to contain her excitement, but the glittering tears failed her.
妈妈试图抑制自己的激动,却激动得落泪了。
8.Flowers were waving in the breeze of the early spring.Birds were singing, the air was filled with laughter, and everyone was in the best of moods.(借景抒情)
花儿在早春的微风中摇曳,鸟儿在歌唱,空气中满是欢声笑语,人人心情愉悦。
分素材积累2--情绪篇--吃惊惊讶
必背好词:amazement,astonishment,surprise,astonished,amazed,surprised,stunned(目瞪口呆的),wide-eyed(睁大眼睛的)
满分短语:to one’s amazement/astonishment令人惊讶的是,sb’s jaw dropped 目瞪口呆,give a cry of surprise 吃惊地喊出声来,take sb. back 使某人大吃一惊,freeze/stand still 惊呆了
1.“So two are cheaper than one?”Alice asked in a surprised voice/tone,taking out her purse.
爱丽丝拿出钱包,非常惊奇地文,“这么说,两个比一个更便宜?”
2.Hearing the unexpected news, Mary froze with shock, as if rooted to the spot.
听到这个意外的消息,玛丽呆住了,动弹不得。
3.The car was gone in seconds, leaving Alice shaking her head in disbelief.
几秒钟后汽车开走了,爱丽丝难以置信地摇头。
4.Much to my surprise, I saw the bright smile on his thin face and I couldn't believe my eyes.
令我吃惊的是,我看到他瘦削的脸上灿烂的笑容,我简直不敢相信自己的眼睛。
5.A spark of surprise flash/passed across his face, he froze there, staring at me with white eyes.
他脸上闪过一丝惊奇,他惊得瞪大眼睛看着我。
6.It gave me a shock when I realized how close I had come to being killed.
我才意识到自己刚才差点儿没命,吓了一大跳。
7.When I looked at the great on my math paper, my jaw dropped to the ground.(夸张手法)
看到数学卷子成绩的那一刻,我惊得下巴掉在了地上。
满分素材积累3--情绪篇--难过伤心沮丧
必背好词:sorrow,sorrowful,sadness,grief 悲伤,depression 沮丧,sink(消沉),upset,frustrated 沮丧的,miserable(痛苦的),heart-broken伤心的,painfully
满分短语:in a sorrowful tone/voice伤心地说,sob(哭泣)/weep with one’s face hidden in one’s hands 掩面啜泣,hold back tears 抑制住泪水,too upset to speak难过地说不下去, to one’s sadness/sorrow 令某人难过的是
1.The expression on her face upset Mr. Smith deeply.With a heavy heart, Mr. Smith walked home.
她脸上的表情让史密斯先生很难过,他心情沉重地走回家。
2.I felt so sad that I found myself crying unconsciously, unable to hold/fight back my tears.
我难过的哭了,无法抑制我的眼泪。
3.He shook his head miserably/sadly, tears pouring/running/streaming/rolling down his cheeks/face.
他难过的摇摇头,潸然泪下。
4.Tears swelled up in her eyes and her heart seemed to be torn.
他泪如泉涌,心都要碎了。
5.She was pale and thin, and the dimples had gone from her pretty face and her eyes looked sad.
她苍白憔悴漂亮的脸上已经不见酒窝,眼睛里露出了悲伤。
6.As he looked at the Catherine, great sorrow/sadness clouded his eyes.(无灵主语)
他看着凯瑟琳,满眼忧伤。
7. A wave of sadness welled up inside her. Tears were beginning to gather in her eyes.(无灵主语)
一阵悲伤,涌上他的心头,他眼里涌上泪水。
8.When he heard the news of his friend's accident, a frown stood on his face and his face clouded over.(无灵主语)
当他听说他的朋友出了事故时,他眉头紧锁,满脸愁容。
9.An air of sorrow and depression settled over the crowd.(借景抒情)
人群中弥漫着悲伤和沮丧的气氛。
满分素材积累4--情绪篇--恐惧
必背好词:fear, frighten, panic 惊恐的, scare, pound(心砰砰跳), afraid, alarmed, frightened, panicked, scared, terrified, dreadful (令人害怕的)
满分短语:shake/tremble with fear 吓得发抖, stand rooted to the spot with fear吓得呆若木鸡,be froze/numb with fear 吓呆
1.When that dog jumped out at me, I froze with terror , too scared to move an inch.
那条狗突然跳出来冲向我,我吓呆了,一动也不敢动。
2.He was thrown into panic, his hands shaking with fear.
他一下子惊慌起来,吓得双手颤抖。
3.Frozen/Numb with fear, Mac couldn't say a word and dared not look at his father's cloudy face.
麦克瞎呆了一句话也说不出来,也不敢看他爸爸那张阴云密布的脸。
4.Jane turned white/pale and a look of panic/horror crossed/spread across her face.
简脸色变得苍白,脸上掠过惊恐的神情 。
5.My brain was blank. I just wanted to leave this horrible place.
我大脑一片空白,只想离开这个恐怖的地方。
6.A flood of fear welled up in/swept over /swallowed / overwhelmed him. His throat tightened and his knee felt weak.
他惊恐不已,他喉咙发紧,膝盖发软 。
7.The night was very quiet, so even the slightest sound made them jump from fear.(借景抒情)
夜晚非常安静,所以即使是最轻微的声音,也使得他们吓得跳起来
满分素材积累5--情绪篇--愤怒
必背好词:rage, anger, annoy, annoyance, stamp跺脚, frown皱眉, angry, cross生气的, annoyed, furious暴怒的, mad, angrily, crossly, furiously, madly
满分短语: glare at sb.怒视, flush with anger气得涨红,burst into anger 勃然大怒, tremble with anger 气得发抖,sb.’s face falls/darkens 脸沉/黑下来,a look of burning anger 愤怒的一眼
1.Jan could hardly contain her rage/anger slamming her face on the desk in anger.
简无法抑制她的愤怒,愤怒地用拳头猛锤桌子
2.“Stop it !”Jessie shouted angrily. Her teeth locked together in anger.
住手杰西怒喝到,她气得咬牙切齿
3.Boiling with rage, Tom shook his fist at me, and roared. “How dare you?”
汤姆怒火中烧,对我挥舞着拳头吼道,你怎么敢?
4.He was tongue-tied with anger , unable to utter a single word.His hands trembled.
他气得张口结舌,一句话也说不出来,双手直颤抖
5.Andy's mouth was shut tight. As he glared at her,his face was clouded with anger.
安迪的嘴紧闭着他瞪着他,怒容满面
6.He trembled with anger from head to foot, he roared in his heart like a lion.(夸张+比喻)
他气得浑身发抖,他在心里像狮子一样怒吼着。
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